Hundreds of stray dogs are kept in an awful environment where the floor is covered with excrement, drinking muddy dirty water and eating feeding that has already become moldy.
This is not something happened in puppy mill but in "Taipei County Loving Life Association", a benevolent private dogs shelter running by lady 賈鴻秋.

2010/2/17, just when everybody was enjoying the happy atmosphere of Chinese New Year, lady 賈鴻秋 was found passed out in a temple stairway. After four days in the hospital, doctor certified her death in 2010/2/21. This news indeed shocked many dog-lovers in Taiwan. But after her death, how to deal with those stray dogs in her association has now become a bigger problem.
Why has it become a bigger problem? Because if it wasn't for her death, people wouldn't discover that her dogs shelter was actually in such an awful condition that it had already reached the level of animal abuse.

After seeing the miserable situation of these dogs, people started to question: Is this the kind of life those dogs really want? Private animal shelter takes in animals without considering one's ability and without limitation, is it really good for animals?

賈鴻秋's death accidentally revealed the truth of some private dogs shelters and made more people think about the true meaning of animal welfare. There are still a lot to discuss relating to animal welfare, but now let's just hope this kind of miserable story won't ever happen in private animal shelters again.
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